Action Plan for third draft

Action Plan 

• More references needed throughout essay on each page
• More book quotes needed 
• More examples of a variety of music videos in the grime industry in order to come up with a more overall answer
• Improve conclusion referring back to the main points of my essay 
• Add more wider contexts and issues throughout the essay
• Add theories relating to the grime and black industry such as the Stuart Hall theory.. 
• Use much more media terminology throughout essay referring to many examples and quotes to insure I reach a minimum of a level 3 
• Bibliography has to be improved such as putting it in alphabetical order, using the correct fonts such as italics, using the correct headings such as works cited and works consulted